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2015年6月16日 星期二

☆創作小書A組比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Cathy K.C. Chan 詹可婕


A fish adventure

It’s eight o’clock and I have just finished my dinner. I’m sitting on the sofa talking to my parents about my day at school. We start to play cards, but I can’t keep my eyes open! I’m falling asleep on sofa.
My eyes are clothed, but I feel something touching me. I open my eyes and see hundreds of fish all around me! I start to flout in the room. I look at my hands and they have become fins! “I’m a fish!” I shut.
Next, I saw all the fish swimming out the window, so I followed them. Wow! Outside there was a beautiful blue ocean. “It’s so much fun to be a fish”, I thought. I continued to swim and play with the other fish!
Suddenly, a cute fish with a butter fly bow on her head appeared in front of me. She said her name was “Cathy”. We played together and had pillow fight with the other fish. We were so happy and I didn’t want to be a human again.
One day, Cathy invited me to her house. Her house was so beautiful, just like a palace!
After a lot of planning, Cathy and I started on our adventure! We travelled for many hours, until the ocean got darker and darker. Suddenly, we saw something bright. We quickly swam toward the light. “Oh! It’s just a shell”, I said.
At that moment, I saw something tall right in front of me. “Look! It is a castle.” I shouted. Just then, I saw a lot of monsters all around us. Cathy picked up the shell and used the light to blind the monsters. Next, I saw a shiny key in a monster’s heat. I took out a knife and stabbed it, then I pulled out the key. We quickly swam into the castle.
Finally, I saw the box. When I wanted to open it, a shark swam towards me “AH!” I screamed. Suddenly, I felt someone slapping my face. “Peter, wake up! Peter, wake up!”
It was just a dream!

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Cathy K.C. Chan (詹可婕)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:鄧駿傑 Jay
得獎殊榮:創作小書A比賽〝特優〞獎項




☆創作小書A組比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Emma Y.H. Chang 張詠涵

A Picnic with my friend

My friend and I were going to have a picnic in the park. I was so excited, so I woke up at 7:00 and prepared cooking, fruits, sandwiches, tea and milk, At 7:40, I just walked to my friend, Eileen’s house and waited for other friends.
At 8:00, Betty Wu, Joy and Peter all came here and we put everything in the car. Eileen’s mother was very nice and she wanted to give us a ride to the park.
On the way there, I could see the park form the car window and I told my friends Betty Wu said, “Wow! It’s beautiful and there are many trees in the park.” When the car stopped, everyone just took out the stuff and ran to the park.
We settled down everything and started to play ball. When Joy threw the ball to Eileen, she couldn’t get the ball. Because she was too short. The ball stuck in a tree. I wanted to help Eileen, but I didn’t know how to climb a tree. When I was thinking how to get the ball Peter came.
Peter climbed on the tree very quickly. When he found the ball, he saw something long and thick. He wanted to get that thing, but that thing was moving very quickly.
He didn’t know what the thing was. When he wanted to touch it again, the thing just looked at him. Peter shouted, “Oh, no! It’s a snake.” He was scared and he almost fell from the tree.
He wanted to get down from the tree quickly because he thought the snake wanted to bite him. He first threw the ball down to us, but he didn’t stand properly and he just fell down.
Luckily, he was fine. He was very lucky that the snake didn’t bite him. We played ball together until 4:00 and everyone started to clean up.
On the way home, Joy said she wanted to play more and she didn’t want to go home. I told her let’s come here again next time.
We went home at 6:00. Everyone was tired, but we were very happy. I hope I still can came to this beautiful park again with all my friend next time.

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Emma Y.H. Chang (張詠涵)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:鄧駿傑 Jay
得獎殊榮:創作小書A比賽〝特優〞獎項


☆創作小書A組比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Norman S.M. Chen 陳詩孟

 An adventure

Once upon a time, there was a man named Norman. He was twenty-five years old and he was brave. He lived with his family and felt happy every day.
One day, Norman went traveling in Egypt. When he got there, he saw a lot of pyramids and they were huge and beautiful. When he wanted to take some pictures, he saw something coming out from the pyramid. He was curious and he wanted to get a closer look.
When he got there, he saw a wizard. He knew that was a wizard because he saw a crystal floating between the man’s hands and he was floating in the sky, too. Then he heard him saying “This world will be mine and everyone will be my saves. If I can get all the power from this crystal, I can get everything I want.” Norman felt surprised, so he decided to follow him and see what was going on.
The man walked into the pyramid, so Norman quickly followed him. In the pyramid, he saw a statue of a Sacred Beetle. It was in the middle of the room and a crystal was held by the beetle. He knew that it was the same crystal that was floating between the wizard’s hands. So he went to the statue and took the crystal.
Suddenly, the whole room was shaking, Norman got scared. He thought he should put the crystal back, but the beetle statue was broken. The walls and the ceiling were falling, so he ran away as fast as he could. Luckily, he got to the entrance and went out of the scary pyramid.
But just as he was feeling safe, the wizard appeared behind him. The wizard tried to get the crystal back from Norman, but Norman knew that if the wizard got the crystal, it would be the end of the world.
Unfortunately, the wizard won. Then the wizard tied Norman’s hands and got the crystal black. When he was happy about it, the sunlight shone through the crystal and shot into the wizard’s eyes. His eyes got burned and he dropped the crystal. Norman got the crystal back and escaped from this terrible place.
After a few days, Norman went home and told the story to his mom. She was so happy that he was safe and she was surprised that there were wizards in this world.
When Norman went back to work and he thought everything became normal, something bad happened. He crashed his car and almost got killed. Then his house was almost on fire. That made him almost lose his parents!
He realized it was the crystal’s problem, so he threw it in the ocean and it was never see again.

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Norman S.M. Chen (陳詩孟)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:鄧駿傑 Jay
得獎殊榮:創作小書A比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆創作小書A組比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Eric S.Y. Chan 詹翔允

Robot Century

In the year 3040, robots become our family. They help us to clean our house, cook our meals and make our lives become more convenient. There is a boy name Martin. His dad and mom Harry and Rose are the smartest robot programmers in the world. They design a lot of different robots, but they are not satisfied. They want to build an AI robot.
After a few years, Harry and Rose finally build an Ai robot called “The King”. “The King” looks like a thirty-year-old man. He has brown hair and his height is two meters. His eyes can tell good people from bad people. His skin can protect itself, so no guns and bombs can hurt it. It has a strong electric gun in his right arm and it can lift something 10 times heavier than his body weight.
One night, a spy breaks in to the lab. He wants to steal “The King”. When he turns on the flash light in his hand, he sees “The King”. He is very surprised, so he tries to steal it. He touches “The King” and tries to find out how to move it. When he touches a button by accident and “The King” wakes up.
The spy tries to turn it off, but “The King” starts shooting with his electric gun. He breaks many things in the lab and takes away the weapons from the armory. When Harry and Rose get to the lab, “The King” is already out of control and it kills them with the electric gun.
Then, “The King” walks to the street. He breaks many buildings and hurts many people. Then he finds out that he can produce little robots want to stop him, “The King” and his little robots just use their electric guns to destroy the police robots. A lot of people die.
At the same time, Martin finds a piece of paper that shows how to stop “The King”. It says that you can turn off “The King” with a remote control. But the remote control is in the lab. So he takes the laser gun and his robot “Jupiter” to go to the lab.
When Martin and Jupiter arrive at the lab, there are already a lot of bad robots guarding there. He takes out his laser gun and starts shooting. He tries to draw the robot’s attention away from the lab. He attacks those robots and runs into the lab when they are not playing attention.
Martin and Jupiter go into the lab. At the same time, “The King” jumps out and attacks Martin. Martin quickly takes out his laser gun and fights with “The King”. Then he runs and jumps to dodge the attacks from “The King”. Suddenly, he sees the reroute control.
Martin sees the remote control in drawer and decides to get it. He sees “The King” focuses on Jupiter, then he runs to get the remote control. When “The King” realizes Martin gets the remote control, it’s too late. Martin presses the bottom on the remote control. “The King” shuts down and falls on the floor.
Martin and Jupiter stop “The King” and they save the Earth. Everyone is so happy. They become heroes and everyone likes them. The country gives them a lot of money to thank them for saving everyone.

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Eric S.Y. Chan (詹翔允)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:鄧駿傑 Jay
得獎殊榮:創作小書A比賽〝優等〞獎項


☆創作小書A組比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Oscar J.H. Liu 劉仁禾


 A trip to Hell

One upon a time, there was a boy name Lewis. He was fourteen years old and he was tall and skinny. He liked to drink alcohol and he wanted to travel everywhere.
There was one time Lewis was at a bar on a winter’s night in Paris. He was alone and he got drunk with alcohol. But when he woke up, he was in hell. He started walking around and he felt good and excited.
He looked around and he saw bones, volcanoes with Lava Mountains with fire and a castle with a big gate. He walked towards the gate. Suddenly, the big gate opened. The king of hell, Hades and his pet tree-headed dog, were sitting on the chair in castle.
“Let me show you what things are there in hell” Hades said. “OK” Lewis replied. Then Hades started to show him around the hell. On the first floor, there were people who didn’t pray to the gods. Their punishment was to walk on the mountain full of swards for one year.
Next Hades took Lewis to the second floor of the hell. There were people who ate too much food. Their punishment was to stand in the line with a snow storm. It was so cold, so Hades took Lewis to the next floor of the hell.
The third floor was very different from the second floor. It was so hot because there was a giant pot full of hot oil. There were people who bullied someone and they would be thrown into the pot being deep fired.
After that, Hades took Lewis to the next floor of the hell. People who always got angry and fought with people needed to soccer with big rock.
The next floor was the three-headed dog lived. It ate people who killed other people when they were alive. That was their punishment.
The last floor of hell was for the worst people in the world. They have done so many bad things, so Satan would eat them one by one.
Last, Hades took Lewis back to the castle and Hades told Lewis to drink the purple water that was put in a small bottle. Then Lewis passed out. When he woke up, he was in the bar.

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Oscar J.H. Liu (劉仁禾)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:鄧駿傑 Jay
得獎殊榮:創作小書A比賽〝優等〞獎項


2015年6月15日 星期一

☆繪畫寫作比賽 特優作品 ☆東勢分校,Coleen H.Y. Wang 王婷瑜


One day, a mouse took a tiger’s tail to its house. The tiger said “Help me! Help me! Help me...” A bird and a rabbit came to help the tiger. But the mouse didn’t let them in because he wanted to eat it! The tiger quickly ran away.

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Coleen H.Y. Wang (王婷瑜)
就讀期數:205
指導老師:邱佩芸 
得獎殊榮:繪畫寫作比賽〝特優〞獎項

☆看圖寫作B組比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Ella Y.H. Huang 黃語瑄


It is a nice morning. One black shadow is going to Bert’s bed … … Oh! That is Ernie! Ernie is standing next to Bert’s bed. He takes a trumpet and starts blowing it. He says, “Bert, hurry up! It’s time to wake up.” Bert says, “You are so noisy! Why will I wake up so early with you?” Ernie looks happy and says, “I want to eat breakfast with you. We never eat breakfast together, so I have to eat breakfast with you today.” Bert thinks that is a great idea, so he get out of his bed. Finally, they have a nice breakfast together. What a wonderful day it is!

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Ella Y.H. Huang (黃語瑄)
就讀期數:209
指導老師:辛海藍 
得獎殊榮:看圖寫作B比賽〝優等〞獎項