2015年6月16日 星期二

☆創作小書A組比賽 優等作品 ☆鹽行分校,Hsiang-Jen Chang 張翔荏


The Washing Machine Monster

Iden’s family got a new wash machine. They were happy.
Iden collected all the dirty clothes and put them into the washing machine.
Since they have a washing machine, their clothes are always missing.  “Where did my sock go?” said Iden.
One day, Iden was watching TV. He saw bad news about some children playing hide and seek that died in washing machine.
He was very worried about his laundry and thought there must be something hiding in the washing machine.
So Iden and his brother went to laundry room.
When they got close to the machine, they heard it shaking and singing.
Iden was so afraid! No one dared to get too close to the washing machine.
So, Iden closely looked into the machine. Suddenly, a gopher that was hidden in the machine jump out!
“Wow, a gopher! What are you doing in the washing machine?” Said Iden.
“I just wanted to get some attention, I wanted to make some friends.” said the Gopher.
“But how did you survive in the washing machine without air, you could die!” asked Iden’s brother.
The gopher said, “Look at my equipment, I have an airtank and goggles so that I could breathe in the water.”
Gopher then said, “Look at what I have got.” “A bag of coins! You are rich!” said Iden.
Gopher told Iden that his family always forget to check their pockets, so now he has got lots of money.
“Look at these fancy pants. There was tissue paper all over these pants because some people forgot to take it out before they washed them.” said Gopher.
The Gopher also remind Iden’s family. The whit clothes shouldn’t be washed with colored clothes. “See this scarf? It used to be whit but now is green!” said Iden.
Iden and his family learned a lesson from Gopher.
They also started to follow the Gopher’s advice and used the washing machine carefully. In the end, Gopher didn’t hide in the machine anymore. He lived with Iden’s family happily.


學校名稱:鹽行
學生姓名:Hsiang-Jen Chang (張翔荏)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:蘇畇勻 Stacy
得獎殊榮:創作小書A比賽〝優等〞獎