2015年6月16日 星期二

☆創作小書A組比賽 優等作品 ☆東勢分校,Oscar J.H. Liu 劉仁禾


 A trip to Hell

One upon a time, there was a boy name Lewis. He was fourteen years old and he was tall and skinny. He liked to drink alcohol and he wanted to travel everywhere.
There was one time Lewis was at a bar on a winter’s night in Paris. He was alone and he got drunk with alcohol. But when he woke up, he was in hell. He started walking around and he felt good and excited.
He looked around and he saw bones, volcanoes with Lava Mountains with fire and a castle with a big gate. He walked towards the gate. Suddenly, the big gate opened. The king of hell, Hades and his pet tree-headed dog, were sitting on the chair in castle.
“Let me show you what things are there in hell” Hades said. “OK” Lewis replied. Then Hades started to show him around the hell. On the first floor, there were people who didn’t pray to the gods. Their punishment was to walk on the mountain full of swards for one year.
Next Hades took Lewis to the second floor of the hell. There were people who ate too much food. Their punishment was to stand in the line with a snow storm. It was so cold, so Hades took Lewis to the next floor of the hell.
The third floor was very different from the second floor. It was so hot because there was a giant pot full of hot oil. There were people who bullied someone and they would be thrown into the pot being deep fired.
After that, Hades took Lewis to the next floor of the hell. People who always got angry and fought with people needed to soccer with big rock.
The next floor was the three-headed dog lived. It ate people who killed other people when they were alive. That was their punishment.
The last floor of hell was for the worst people in the world. They have done so many bad things, so Satan would eat them one by one.
Last, Hades took Lewis back to the castle and Hades told Lewis to drink the purple water that was put in a small bottle. Then Lewis passed out. When he woke up, he was in the bar.

學校名稱:東勢
學生姓名:Oscar J.H. Liu (劉仁禾)
就讀期數:213
指導老師:鄧駿傑 Jay
得獎殊榮:創作小書A比賽〝優等〞獎項